Show White and Seven Dwarfs
Once upon a time, a child was born of a very wise queen. The
child was named snow white. The queen died after giving birth to her daughter.
One year after hir birth the king married again with a beautiful woman. but her
heart wasn’t as pretty as her face. The queen had a magic mirror that can talk.
The queen asked the magic mirror "Oh mirror who is most beautiful among
all women? "Mirror replied," You are the most beautiful of all Oh
queen”. the queen was proud of her beauty as a magic mirror never lie. Snow
white was growing up and her beauty beyond queen’s beauty. The queen was very
jealous of her beauty.
Distaste of the queen made her want to get rid of the snow
white. she told one of his men bring show white into the forest to kill her and
took her heart. But when he attend to kill snow white, she cried and asked the
man to let her live and promised
never return to the palace again. Queen's
man fulfilled the request because he didn’t have the heart to kill her. then he
searched for a wild hog to taken its heart instead of snow white’s heart. Snow
white then went into the forest.
In the forest, snow white felt scare. She ran until her feet
hurt. Then she found a small house and went into it. she was rested while looking
at the house. There were 7 pieces of bed and a kitchen in it.All look smaller
than normal size. starting from beds, tables, cups and others. The princess
fell asleep from her tired. The Householder came home, they are seven dwarves.
They were surprised to see a young woman asleep in the house. They woke her and
asked who she was. The princess was telling his story to the dwarves.
Queen really happy to see evidence of the death of the snow
white, she asked the magic mirror “oh magic mirror who is now the most
beautiful of all ?”. magic mirror replied "you are the a prettiest of all
oh queen, but the snow white who lives with seven dwarfs in the forest is the
most beautiful woman of all." The Queen was very angry. she returned
planning to kill the snow white.
One day, she disguised as an old lady and carryed a basket
containing poisoned apples. she went to the home of the dwarves while they're
worked.she knocked on the door while offering an apple to snow white. Snow
white refused because she did not recognize the old lady. The old lady
continued to force the snow white to open the door and receive a gift apple.
Snow white finally opened the door and received the apple. The queen went back
happily to the castle. Snow white ete the poisoned apple and then he fell down
on the floor.
When the seven dwarfs came home, they were surprised to found
show white was lying on the floor with an apple next to her. They were very sad
to see the snow princess asleep. After that, the 7 dwarfs made a wonderful bed
for snow white. One day, a prince through the forest then lead him to the dwarf
house. He saw snow princess sleeping in bed beautiful. The prince asked the
dwarves about what happened to her. The dwarf was telling him all about the
snow white.
The prince asked permission to the dwarves to bring snow
white to the palace so she can be treated by the royal physician. But no one
can woke her up. The Prince finally gave
up and kiss the snow white because he
loved her so much. Suddenly, the snow white awoken.actually the cure of the poison that
was given by the evil queen is the kiss of a man who loved her with all his heart.The prince was then
proposed for the snow white to became her queen and snow white accepted
happily. They live happily with seven dwarfs in the palace ever and after.
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Once upon a time, a child was
born of a very wise queen. The child was named snow white. The queen died after
giving birth to her daughter. One year after hir birth the king married again
with a beautiful woman. But her heart
wasn’t as pretty as her face. The queen had a magic mirror that can talk. The queen asked the magic
mirror "Oh mirror who is most beautiful among all women?
"Mirror replied," You are the most beautiful of all Oh queen”. the
queen was proud of her beauty as a magic mirror never lie. Snow white was
growing up and her beauty beyond queen’s beauty. The queen was very jealous
of her beauty.
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Distaste of the
queen made her want to get rid of the snow white. She told one of his
men bring show white into the forest to kill her and took her heart. But when
he attend to kill snow white, she cried and asked the man to let her live and promised never return to the palace again. Queen's man
fulfilled the request because he didn’t have the heart to kill her. Then
he searched for a wild hog to taken its heart instead of snow white’s heart.
Snow white then went into the forest.
In the forest,
snow white felt scare. She ran until her feet hurt. Then she found a small
house and went into it. she was rested while looking at the house. There were
7 pieces of bed and a kitchen in it.All look smaller than normal size.
starting from beds, tables, cups and others. The princess fell asleep from
her tired. The Householder came home, they are seven dwarves. They were
surprised to see a young woman asleep in the house. They woke her and asked
who she was. The princess was telling his story to the dwarves.
Queen really happy
to see evidence of the death of the snow white, she asked the magic mirror
“oh magic mirror who is now the most beautiful of all ?”. magic mirror replied
"you are the a prettiest of all oh queen, but the snow white who lives
with seven dwarfs in the forest is the most beautiful woman of all." The
Queen was very angry. she returned planning to kill the snow white.
One day, she
disguised as an old lady and carryed a basket containing poisoned apples. she
went to the home of the dwarves while they're worked.she knocked on the door
while offering an apple to snow white. Snow white refused because she did not
recognize the old lady. The old lady continued to force the snow white to
open the door and receive a gift apple. Snow white finally opened the door
and received the apple. The queen went back happily to the castle. Snow white
ete the poisoned apple and then he fell down on the floor.
When the seven
dwarfs came home, they were surprised to found show white was lying on the
floor with an apple next to her. They were very sad to see the snow princess
asleep. After that, the 7 dwarfs made a wonderful bed for snow white.
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One day, a prince
through the forest then lead him to the dwarf house. He saw snow princess
sleeping in bed beautiful. The prince asked the dwarves about what happened
to her. The dwarf was telling him all about the snow white.
The prince asked
permission to the dwarves to bring snow white to the palace so she can be
treated by the royal physician. But no one can woke her up. The Prince finally gave up and kiss the snow
white because he loved her so much.
Suddenly, the snow white awoken.actually
the cure of the poison that was given by the evil queen is the kiss of a man
who loved her with all his heart.The
prince was then proposed for the snow white to became her queen and snow
white accepted happily. They live happily with seven dwarfs in the palace
ever and after.
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